You wrote a book!
Now it's time to make it awesome, and I can help. It's my job to help you figure out how to make your story into the best possible version of itself--and to help you grow as a writer in the process.
"For writers needing a sharp eye to review their query or pages, I strongly recommend working with Naomi."
-Tegan Wren, INCONCEIVABLE (Curiosity Quills, 2015)
"Naomi's insights on my query letter were nothing short of fabulous!"
-Kendra Young, agented MG writer
"Simply put, Naomi Hughes is an excellent editor."
-Wade White, THE ADVENTURER'S GUIDE TO SUCCESSFUL ESCAPES & sequel (Little, Brown, 2016/2017)
Every editor has specialties: the genres we love,
the types of stories we know best.
Here are mine!
For small stuff (queries, synopses, etc.), I can work with any audience or genre except horror or erotica.
Yay for kidlit! I love fantasy, sci-fi, adventures, & fun. Tragic or super-spooky stuff isn't for me, though.
YOUNG ADULT STORIES
I adore twisty plots, quirk, high concepts, & impossible romances. No dark or super-violent stories please!
I love heroines with agency & a sense of humor! I'm okay with category-style heat levels but no erotica, please.
Client Good News
Client Good News
About me: I'm Naomi Hughes, freelance editor and assistant editor at Entangled Publishing. I've served as a mentor/judge in many writing contests (including Pitch Madness, Query Kombat, and the infamous Pitch Wars) over the past few years. I have a Bachelor's Degree in Mass Communication and work toward a Master's Degree in Library and Information Studies. I'm also a writer myself--if you want to find out more about my quirky young adult and middle-grade stories, you can check out my author page here!
Common Story Issues: Curious about what sort of problems I find most often in manuscripts? Check out my list of common issues!
Pitch Wars: The rumors are true! I will be mentoring the Young Adult category in 2016. Keep an eye out for my wishlist post (coming in July), and in the meantime you can see my posts from years past at my wishlist page.
What can I help you with?
Does your query need to be whipped into shape? Are you trying to trim your synopsis down to that mythical single page? Need help figuring out where to start with revisions on your full manuscript? Check out my services!
Critiques for your query + first 10 pages
If you're getting rejections at the query level & want to figure out why, this is the option for you.
Help for your story as a whole
Need to get eyes on your story? I offer full manuscript critiques, reader reports, and line editing.
Queries, Synopses & Pitches
Help for the really tough stuff
Includes brainstorming options, where I help you build a shiny new query or Twitter pitch from scratch.
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