Full Manuscripts

Need help revising your story?

I'm currently offering:

EDIT LETTERS: Flat fee of $120 plus $.004/word


I will read your whole manuscript and give you an edit letter outlining your story's strengths, weaknesses, and ideas on how to make it the best possible version of itself. This will give you a good idea of where to get started on your revisions without nit-picking all the small-scale issues, as this doesn't include any in-manuscript comments. Edit letters are typically 3-7 single-spaced pages, and you can see some examples of my past real-life edit letters here. Typical problem spots discussed in edit letters include developmental issues such as plot holes, missing or underdeveloped character goals and motivations, underdeveloped villains, flat character arcs, potential for stronger relationship dynamics between characters, telling vs. showing and other widespread craft issues, and world-building that needs to be strengthened. For a list of the most common developmental issues I come across during my editing, check out this post.


Categories I love to work with: Young Adult, Middle Grade, and Romance (genre romance or category romance). I also work with these genres on a case-by-case basis: women's fiction, adult sci-fi and fantasy, chapter books.


Categories I DO NOT work with: Horror, anything extremely dark or tragic, erotica (different from romance).

Due to changes in my scheduling availability, I am no longer offering Full Manuscript Critiques or line edits. I will update this page if that changes in the future. If you have any questions about this, please feel free to email me and ask!

Booking & Payment


If you're ready to book (or want a sample critique), drop your info into the contact form and I'll get back to you asap. Payments are made via Paypal and reserve your spot on my schedule. If you book 4+ weeks in advance, I offer an option to pay a 1/2 deposit with the rest due the day I start the project.

Now booking:

5-7 weeks out

Cancellation Policy


If you need to cancel, please let me know asap so I can fill your spot! If you cancel up to 4 weeks before your read, there's no fee. If you cancel later than that, there's a potential cancellation fee of 20%, as it's difficult for me to fill empty slots on short notice. If I can find another client to take your spot, this fee won't be charged.

Naomi Edits

Naomi Edits  |  Naomi L. Hughes